needs much work
ok, there are alot of things wrong with this piece that you need to know, but listen to what i ahve to say first. first off, you keep on repeating the same thing over again, and the song becomes irratating and you dont want to listen to it anymore. Another problem is you stopped right between the piece for about 5sec and than continued. with those being said heres what i ahve to say about the piece thats great.
the song had some really unbelieveable parts in it, so i can understand where your getting at. some parts i was like WOAH!!! and others i was like COME ON ALREADY I WANT TO HEAR THE LAST AMAZING BEAT!!! If i were you i would go back, re write this song and re record it. But this song hsa some great potential in it.