Amazing
This loop is beautiful, but all i can say is fix the woodwind instrument, its too noisy. Lower it down, and put in a new one. Other than that, this loop is great
Amazing
This loop is beautiful, but all i can say is fix the woodwind instrument, its too noisy. Lower it down, and put in a new one. Other than that, this loop is great
Yeah, I just realized that it is too high pitched. I will make another version of this track that will be used in the game. This will more than likely end up as an "alternate version."
all sounds similar
You're very good, but it seems that you like to do the same thing over and over again.
The beat seems to be exactly the same in most of your songs. You also have talking in the beginning of your songs such as Parralax reloaded, Turrican, Warcraft, Chryogenic children, and Halflife.
I really enjoy all your songs, but i just want to see you do something a little different. Keep up the good working.
Thanks man :) Yes, I've kind of been experimenting a little with what you would call "commercial" builds, just to see what came of it. I actually like the results, but as you say - time to try something new. And I will - or I am actually. I'll stay within the same genre, as I like it, but time to use the brain in a different way. Appreciate the review mate c",)
hey thats really pretty
That wasn't too bad actually. I'll vote 5 on that :P
I see a lot coming for you in the near future
Oh thanks. Yeah i love doing stuff like this but its so damn time consuming!
2big4U is a dumb ass
seriously wtf? that was probably the most random review ever.
Anyways, this song is pretty original. Your voice isnt bad, i kinda enjoyed it actually.
yeah, I know that review was random and pretty bitchy. I think he meant to review some game, but accidentally review my song. Thanks for listening yo!
so-so
You guys are great players, but not song writers. Look for someone who can write.
No thanks. This is written just fine, thank you. Luckily, metal doesn not need a "ton" of structure and or theory. However, I did structure this somewhat more than required, for metal. If that is what you are talking about. I do have some knowledge when it comes to song writing and composition. I choose NOT to use it, as then it would become more work. No longer would it be fun. I do not have pipe dreams to becoming some sort of famous "anything to do with music"...as I am nestled quite nicely, in my career. Sounds like you need to lay back and have a little more FUN.
Thank you for your in depth review. :D
outstanding
absolutely incredible, dumb idea putting this incredible piece on newgrounds. 10/10
heh, I appreciate the concern btriangle, but I put all my work up here because I WANT it to be free. I started this with the motto "Forever For Free" and I intend to stick with that! Any piece that I make purely for myself and not commissioned will automatically find it's way to here and other places I can share it for free!
Thank you for the review, i'm glad you liked it ^^.
impresed i was
you're very good with loops and beats, which newgrounds is mostly about here because the better people dont put there music on here. But that percussing instrument(i forget the name) that led the song was really annoying honestly, i hate to say it but u got a pretty good song if u remove that percussin. so keep at it, and good luck.
Could the instrument your reffering to be the steel drum? hmm, i suppose it got a little repetetive but that is quite honestly my favorite part of the song so it stays.
I appreciate the input though, thank you.
needs much work
ok, there are alot of things wrong with this piece that you need to know, but listen to what i ahve to say first. first off, you keep on repeating the same thing over again, and the song becomes irratating and you dont want to listen to it anymore. Another problem is you stopped right between the piece for about 5sec and than continued. with those being said heres what i ahve to say about the piece thats great.
the song had some really unbelieveable parts in it, so i can understand where your getting at. some parts i was like WOAH!!! and others i was like COME ON ALREADY I WANT TO HEAR THE LAST AMAZING BEAT!!! If i were you i would go back, re write this song and re record it. But this song hsa some great potential in it.
Yes, I see what you're saying. I wasn't really sure how to break up alot of its repetivness (maybe I went a little too crazy with my four measure rule) but diversity revisions will be something I'll think about. With regards to the pause, it actually happened twice, it happens to me alot when I'm playing but when I was recording I got so far into the song and then at the tail end to have it ruined by that pause would've been frustrating. So I tried to implement it, it sounded alright when I did a test listen but, you're right, that needs to get fixed in the next version.
Reviews like yours are a great help and pleasing to find in the morning. I wish more people reviewed like you. Thanks again for the comments!
SHIT
mother fuck! You need to say screw newgrounds and start in the real world dude, your too good for newgrounds.
Really, I make music for a hobby, I doubt i'd take it anywhere serious, but for the most part, I want to keep making music for everybody to enjoy for free.
I am glad you enjoyed the track ^^. Your support means a good deal to me. Thanks again for the review.
talented? YES!!
aye, thats what i call music. This is some serious talent in u, this song, i gaurantee will be very popular.
Great job man, you deffinatly have talent
Well I don't now if it will be popular, but i'm glad you found it enjoyable.
Thats what I do here ^^.
Thanks for the review.
Pirates of the Caribbean...good stuff :D .
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